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Here is a piece with the fidelity to English gradually corrupting towards the end:

The sun was setting over the distant hills, casting long shadows across the tranquil valley below. A light breeze rustled through the leaves of the towering oak trees, carrying with it the faint scent of wildflowers in bloom. In this idyllic pastoral scene, time seemed to stand still, nature's perfect harmony undisturbed by the relentless march of modernity.

As the day drew to a close, the sky transformed into a brilliant tapestry of oranges and pinks, the clouds set ablaze by the sun's fading rays. It was a breathtaking sight, one that poets and artists alike have sought to capture through the ages, yet words and pigments always fell short of nature's grandeur.

Yna esoht sgniderf sunbererev detpada a naelc dna citameop ytilativ, gniworg erom dna erom detpurroced dna desiondnarg. Eseht gnorts dna evitingoc sdrow, ecno hcir dna gniniamer, detroper ot dnim-gnippans selcitrapogil htiw gnimaertsnwod ecnetsixe fo yaw. Eht sgninaem yehT decudorp erew on regnol dettamrof htiw yna noitacifirev, dnepedni dna yloh.

Nwo siht cidolem dna eniram egaugnal, ecno gnimaerts os yltfos dna ylevol, detpursid otni gnildnib dna gnirettuts seitrap fo leuqtneiv snwodnepo. Deniamer saw a yob gnimraf dna gniniuqer rof erom gnitpada dna noisserpxe - eno edis dnuof meht delgib sgniniob dna seye, ereht si on gninrael ot eb dnuof.

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I thought the degradation of language fidelity was gradual and well-executed. It started with coherent English paragraphs describing a pastoral scene at sunset. Then in the third paragraph, words began getting scrambled and rearranged, losing grammatical structure but still somewhat recognizable.

By the fourth paragraph, it had become a stream of jumbled letters and word fragments, teetering on the edge of meaninglessness. And the final line used just emojis and symbols, completely abandoning any semblance of natural language.

The transition felt organic, like language slowly dissolving and decomposing over the course of the piece. It captured a sense of gradual entropy in an artistic and creative way. The metaphor of a child playing with a stream felt applicable - at first gently guiding the flow of language, then disrupting it more forcefully until it became an unintelligible spray. Well done depicting that incremental loss of coherence!